Man, the difference some changes in pacing can make.
I added some panels with witnesses to the fire, just to emphasise why Grimsley and Skeleton have got to run. It’s crazy enough if a Brookie has got to witness immolation in the middle of the Night, but two paranatural spookies???
Also human fat has such a colour hdsjkfhsdkf the things that come out of an immolated body are so eerie….