Again, nothing too ambitious. I reduced the panel count and varied the shots.
The most significant change is the Mayor’s dialogue with Grimsley and on Blackpool. It seems a bit silly to me now to emphasise the prey and predator aspect (it’s not relevant nor interesting??? What was 18 year old Me thinking??). I’ve had the Blackpool backstory in my head since the early days of Chapter 1, so this is an opportunity to finally include it. It’s vague admittedly, but yall will have to wait for that Chaplette for Grimsley to break the case wide open and solve it!