Wuh oh!!! Oh no! Oh damb Grimmers!!
Also another big revamp. Unlike the previous spread, this is a revamp towards efficiency. I cut out Grimsley’s dialogue since it’s redundant + kinda spoiling the dramatic sense of danger. 6 panels became 4. I clarified Grimsley’s spring-heeled jackiness* – we all can clearly see now he’s jumping over the wolves and landing behind them (I had trouble conveying this action in 2013, can you believe??).
*Spring-Heeled Jack is one of major influences behind Grimsley as a character!
Over the years I learned that my strength is using very few panels to maximum effect (visually or narratively). This has the side-effect of making my graphic novels too simple to read through since my pages are the opposite of a dense and compressed style, but hey, it works.