Some compositional tweaks.

What a waste of talent

The right side of the 2013 layout was awkward, even at the time.

For 2023 I revamped that big panel into something simple and subtler that made use of comics’ unique, formalistic ability to convey wide progressions of time + space by the presence of a gutter in between panels. In the first panel, Grimsley is here, the second, he’s gone. Pretty efficient, and all possible because of a black bar. ✌️

In contrast, the left side is almost unchanged. Even the circular panels are traced. (lol)

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