Nothing too wild page-wise here in terms of changes compared to the last 3 spreads. The pretty minor adjustments to lettering allowed me to trim a couple of panels and change the in-panel composition.

The end of a rigamarole

2 thoughts on “10C1021-022S11

  1. I loved the initial version but wow, the changes and your explanation of them are both amazing! They make me wish I was still a comics scholar.

    One little typo on this page I think? “Unless I intent to remain in this realm” -> intend

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