Oh man, a complete style shift. Tbh, I am not really looking forward to reinterpreting this sequence.

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My 2013 composition is not that exciting, and a bit stiff.

For the 2023 version, I pushed the repouissour elements (the trees) a little more – shape-wise and in their function of framing the text and guiding the flow. The moon and the clouds are also being utilised.

There is some dialogue rehaul for this sequence. Mostly I wanted Mr Brown’s shadiness and totally sus retelling to come across better this time, and to foreshadow stuff that will come up in the later pages.

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